cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins
~
leaf descends to kiss the land
nature follows set motion
* The haiku is written by Jane Reichhold; complimenting it are two verses written by me. For Carpe Diem Tan Renga # 11.
compliment
Fireworks Tan Renga
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
eyes look upon the dark sky
awaiting another blaze
* Written in response of Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge # 4.
* The intriguing haiku is written by Bjorn Rudberg. The challenge was to write a couplet, two verses of 7 syllables each, complimenting the haiku.
Here is another one,
after fireworks
the silence is clearer
darkness is deeper
~
ears keep on buzzing with sounds
eyes glisten with faded light
