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a line breaks from a poem,
worded in the waning wonder of
a vanquished want,

runs through my palm,
resting against the hollow of
my ache — controlled —

measuring ounces of comfort,
harbouring

my nights in an oblivion-obvious pause…

…picking up the pace,
keeping on.

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© Anmol Arora 2018

For dVerse Quadrille
Image source (The Pause of Unknowingness by Dan Crossley)

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18 thoughts on “line-break

  1. Glenn Buttkus says:

    Damn fine use of the prompt–and I love the abstract painting. For me it is primarily the line breaks that differentiates prose from poetics. The descriptions of our creative process were fun too.

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  2. Love how you described line break – harboring pause and then moving on. To exercise restraint and control over one’s writing, speaks of an experienced pen. A creative response to the prompt HA!!!

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  3. Wonderful wordplay, Anmol, especially in the opening line, which could be the beginning of an intellectual joke, but launches into alliterative flight with:
    ‘worded in the waning wonder of
    a vanquished want’.
    I love the phrase ‘resting against the hollow of my ache’.

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  4. sanaarizvi says:

    This is beautifully haunting! ❤️ Somehow those “line breaks from a poem” remind me of the lines on one’s palms.. which denote the purity and strength of the soul. Each person’s journey in this world is different and I feel we are burdened keeping in mind our level of endurance. Especially love; “my nights in an oblivion-obvious pause”..❤️

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  5. I idea of line breaks becoming more than that– a pause in the night. I particularly liked : “resting against the hollow of
    my ache.”
    Also, I like how you used line breaks in this poem.

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