Deutzia Haiku

bound together with

the fiber of emotions

white deutzias

.

free flowering shrub

exuberant in spring sun

blooming deutzias

.

aura of heavens

surrounded by deutzias

hoisted hands, eyes closed

* Written in response of Carpe Diem # 216 Deutzia flower

12 thoughts on “Deutzia Haiku

  1. The last line surprised me and made me curious about who would close their eyes with such beautiful flowers around? I love how the poem cascades down the page, like the flowers do!Deutzia

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